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barefoot on the lawn
thin grass tickles my legs
No One
in their right mind
would wake up this early
so i just stayed up
All night
with my phone
and a friend
and the summer-green lawn
enjoying the sunrise-morning.
our words and laughter
echo
across the street
but we're the only ones
Awake
to hear them.
©2007-2009 ~noodlezoop
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my teacher called it "poem sketching" - we were given a list of words that had been put in groups of four, and then told to write a happy poem and then a sad poem using one group of words for each.

this is the happy poem. ^^
and if youre curious, the word group i picked was "barefoot, sunrise, words, green."

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:iconkngfishergrl:
I hate it when the teacher gives us those kinds of things! I wrack my brains all period and I can't think of anything! How did you manage?

It's very nice! :D

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oh, my teachers really nice - shes pretty cool about everything, so since i knew it wouldnt be a grade, i just wrote whati was thinking. :D
lol this is a true story! :O
several times over. XD
so this word group really appealed to me. :3

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:iconkngfishergrl:
Meh. My teacher has a weird streak, but he's okay. XD

O.o My parents will never let me do that.

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ehe... thing is, neither will mine. XD

...what they dont know wont hurt them. :D

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O.O lol! What'll happen if you get caught?

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i think... ill probly get in trouble. ^^

lol im not sure; ive never been caught. XD

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Me likie!

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Good luck to never getting caught, then. XD

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thank you! :3

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